- New help file: uninstall-Mageia.html

- updates for 3 other English files

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diff --git a/Select-and-use-ISOs.html b/Select-and-use-ISOs.html
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--- a/Select-and-use-ISOs.html
+++ b/Select-and-use-ISOs.html
@@ -50,9 +50,9 @@
                      
                
                      
-               <p>We call a media here a ISO image file that allows to install
-                  and/or update Mageia and by extension any physical support where the ISO
-                        file is copied.
+               <p>Here, a medium (plural: media) is an ISO image file that allows you to install
+                  and/or update Mageia and by extension any physical support the ISO
+                        file is copied to.
                </p>
                
                      
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
                      <ul class="itemizedlist">
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>They use the traditional installer called drakx.</p>
+                           <p>These ISOs use the traditional installer called drakx.</p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
@@ -134,15 +134,15 @@
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Each DVD contains any available desktop environments and
+                           <p>Each DVD contains many available desktop environments and
                                           languages.
                            </p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>You'll be given the choice during the installation to add or
-                                          not non free software.
+                           <p>You'll be given the choice during the installation to add 
+                                          non free software.
                            </p>
                                      
                         </li>
@@ -168,19 +168,19 @@
                      <ul class="itemizedlist">
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Both architectures are present on the same media, the choice
+                           <p>Both architectures are present on the same medium, the choice
                                           is made automatically according to the detected CPU.
                            </p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Xfce desktop only.</p>
+                           <p>Uses Xfce desktop only.</p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Some languages only (be, bg, ca, de, en, es, fr, it, mk, pl,
+                           <p>Not all languages are available. (be, bg, ca, de, en, es, fr, it, mk, pl,
                                           pt, ru, sv, uk) TO BE CHECKED!
                            </p>
                                      
@@ -226,22 +226,22 @@
                      <ul class="itemizedlist">
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Can be used to preview the distribution without first
-                                          installing it on a HDD, and optionally install Mageia on your
-                                          HDD.
+                           <p>Can be used to preview the distribution without installing it on
+                                          a HDD, and optionally install Mageia on to your HDD.
+                                          
                            </p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>ISO contains only one desktop environment (KDE or
+                           <p>Each ISO contains only one desktop environment (KDE or
                                           GNOME).
                            </p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Different media for architecture 32 or 64 bits.</p>
+                           <p>Different media for 32 or 64 bit architectures.</p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>They contains non free software.</p>
+                           <p>They contain non free software.</p>
                                      
                         </li>
                      </ul>
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>32 bits only.</p>
+                           <p>32 bit only.</p>
                                      
                         </li>
                      </ul>
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>32 bits only.</p>
+                           <p>32 bit only.</p>
                                      
                         </li>
                      </ul>
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Different media for architecture 32 or 64 bits.</p>
+                           <p>Different media for 32 or 64 bit architectures.</p>
                                      
                         </li>
                      </ul>
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Different media for architecture 32 or 64 bits.</p>
+                           <p>Different media for 32 or 64 bit architectures.</p>
                                      
                         </li>
                      </ul>
@@ -404,11 +404,11 @@
             </div>
             
                 
-            <div class="section" title="Boot-only CDs media">
+            <div class="section" title="Boot-only CD media">
                <div class="titlepage">
                   <div>
                      <div>
-                        <h4 class="title"><a name="d5e109"></a>Boot-only CDs media
+                        <h4 class="title"><a name="d5e109"></a>Boot-only CD media
                         </h4>
                      </div>
                   </div>
@@ -433,24 +433,25 @@
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
                            <p>Each one is a small image that contains no more than that
-                                          which is needed to start the drakx installer and find the ISO file
-                                          to continue and complete the install. These ISO files may be on
-                                          the PC hard disk, on a local drive, on a local network or on the
+                                          which is needed to start the drakx installer and find
+                                          drakx-installer-stage2 and other packages that are needed to
+                                          continue and complete the install. These packages may be on the
+                                          PC hard disk, on a local drive, on a local network or on the
                                           Internet.
                            </p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>These media are very light (less than 100 Mo) and are
-                                          convenient when bandwidth is too low to download a full DVD, PC
-                                          without DVD drive or PC that can't boot on a USB stick.
+                           <p>These media are very light (less than 100 MB) and are
+                                          convenient when bandwidth is too low to download a full DVD, a PC
+                                          without a DVD drive or a PC that can't boot from a USB stick.
                            </p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Different media for architecture 32 or 64 bits.</p>
+                           <p>Different media for 32 or 64 bit architectures.</p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
@@ -480,7 +481,7 @@
                      <ul class="itemizedlist">
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Contains only free software, for people who refuse non free
+                           <p>Contains only free software, for those people who refuse to use non-free
                                           software.
                            </p>
                                      
@@ -507,7 +508,7 @@
                      <ul class="itemizedlist">
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Contains non free software (mostly drivers, codecs...) for
+                           <p>Contains non-free software (mostly drivers, codecs...) for
                                           people who need it.
                            </p>
                                      
@@ -522,11 +523,11 @@
          </div>
          
            
-         <div class="section" title="Media downloading and checking">
+         <div class="section" title="Downloading and Checking Media">
             <div class="titlepage">
                <div>
                   <div>
-                     <h3 class="title"><a name="d5e132"></a>Media downloading and checking
+                     <h3 class="title"><a name="d5e132"></a>Downloading and Checking Media
                      </h3>
                   </div>
                </div>
@@ -546,22 +547,23 @@
                      
                
                      
-               <p>Once you have chosen your ISO file, you can download it either
-                        using http or BitTorrent. In both cases, a window give you some
-                        information, like the used mirror and the possibility to change if the
-                        bandwidth is to low. If http is chosen, you can also see something
+               <p>Once you have chosen your ISO file, you can download it using
+                        either http or BitTorrent. In both cases, a window gives you some
+                        information, such as the mirror in use and the possibility to change if the
+                        bandwidth is to low. If http is chosen, you may also see something
                         like
                </p>
                
                      
                
                      
-               <p>md5sum and sha1sum are tools to check your ISO integrity. Use only
+               <p>md5sum and sha1sum are tools to check the ISO integrity. Use only
                         one of them. Both hexadecimal numbers have been calculated by an
-                        algorithm from the file to be downloaded. If you ask this algorithm to
-                        calculate again this number from your downloaded file, either you have
+                        algorithm from the file to be downloaded. When you ask these algorithms to
+                        recalculate this number from your downloaded file, either you have
                         the same number and your downloaded file is correct, or the number is
-                        different and you met a failure. Then this window appears:
+                        different and you have a failure. A failure infers that you should retry
+                        the download.Then this window appears:
                </p>
                
                      
@@ -623,17 +625,17 @@
                 
             
                 
-            <p>The checked ISO can now be burned on a CD or DVD or dumped on a USB
-                   stick. These operations are not a simple copy and aim at make a boot-able
-                   media.
+            <p>The checked ISO can now be burned to a CD or DVD or dumped to a USB
+                   stick. These operations are not a simple copy and aim to make a boot-able
+                   medium.
             </p>
             
                 
-            <div class="section" title="Burn the ISO on a CD/DVD">
+            <div class="section" title="Burning the ISO to a CD/DVD">
                <div class="titlepage">
                   <div>
                      <div>
-                        <h4 class="title"><a name="d5e160"></a>Burn the ISO on a CD/DVD
+                        <h4 class="title"><a name="d5e160"></a>Burning the ISO to a CD/DVD
                         </h4>
                      </div>
                   </div>
@@ -641,19 +643,19 @@
                      
                
                      
-               <p>Use whatever burner you want but ensure the burning device is set
-                  	correctly to <span class="bold"><strong>burn an image</strong></span>, burn data or files is not correct.
-                        More information in <a class="ulink" href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Writing_CD_and_DVD_images" target="_top">the Mageia wiki</a>.
+               <p>Use whatever burner you wish but ensure the burning device is set
+                        correctly to <span class="bold"><strong>burn an image</strong></span>, burn data or files is not correct.
+                        There is more information in <a class="ulink" href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Writing_CD_and_DVD_images" target="_top">the Mageia wiki</a>.
                </p>
                    
             </div>
             
                 
-            <div class="section" title="Dump the ISO on a USB stick">
+            <div class="section" title="Dump the ISO to a USB stick">
                <div class="titlepage">
                   <div>
                      <div>
-                        <h4 class="title"><a name="d5e165"></a>Dump the ISO on a USB stick
+                        <h4 class="title"><a name="d5e165"></a>Dump the ISO to a USB stick
                         </h4>
                      </div>
                   </div>
@@ -661,8 +663,8 @@
                      
                
                      
-               <p>All Mageia ISOs are hybrid, which means you can 'dump' them on a
-                        USB stick and use it to boot and install the system.
+               <p>All Mageia ISOs are hybrids, which means you can 'dump' them to a
+                        USB stick and then use it to boot and install the system.
                </p>
                
                      
@@ -675,8 +677,8 @@
                      <tr>
                         <td align="left" valign="top">
                                    
-                           <p>"dumping" an image onto a flash device destroys any prior
-                                      file-system in the partition; any data will be lost and partition
+                           <p>"dumping" an image onto a flash device destroys any previous
+                                      file-system on the device; any other data will be lost and the partition
                                       capacity will be reduced to the image size.
                            </p>
                                  
@@ -686,9 +688,7 @@
                </div>
                
                      
-               <p>To recover the original capacity, you have to format the USB
-                        stick.
-               </p>
+               <p>To recover the original capacity, you must re-format the USB stick.</p>
                
                      
                <div class="section" title="Using Mageia">
@@ -718,8 +718,7 @@
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Become root with the command <strong class="userinput"><code>su -</code></strong> (don't forget the final
-                                          -)
+                           <p>Become root with the command <strong class="userinput"><code>su -</code></strong> (don't forget the final '-' )
                            </p>
                            
                                        
@@ -727,8 +726,8 @@
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
                                        
-                           <p>Plug your USB stick (do not mount it, that means do not open
-                                          any application or file manager that read it)
+                           <p>Plug your USB stick (do not mount it, this also means do not open
+                                          any application or file manager that could access or read it)
                            </p>
                                      
                         </li>
@@ -753,9 +752,10 @@
                                                 bs=1M</code></strong></p>
                            
                                        
-                           <p>(x)=your device name eg: /dev/sdc Example: # <strong class="userinput"><code>dd
-                                                if=/home/user/Downloads/Mageia-4-x86_64-DVD.iso of=/dev/sdb
-                                                bs=1M</code></strong></p>
+                           <p>Where X=your device name eg: /dev/sdc</p>
+                                       
+                           <p> Example: # <strong class="userinput"><code>dd if=/home/user/Downloads/Mageia-4-x86_64-DVD.iso 
+                                                of=/dev/sdb bs=1M</code></strong></p>
                                      
                         </li>
                         <li class="listitem">
@@ -778,7 +778,7 @@
                   <div class="titlepage">
                      <div>
                         <div>
-                           <h5 class="title"><a name="d5e205"></a>Using Windows
+                           <h5 class="title"><a name="d5e206"></a>Using Windows
                            </h5>
                         </div>
                      </div>
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@
                           
                   
                           
-                  <p>You can try:</p>
+                  <p>You could try:</p>
                   
                           
                   <p>- <a class="ulink" href="http://rufus.akeo.ie/?locale=en_US" target="_top">Rufus</a></p>
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@
             <div class="titlepage">
                <div>
                   <div>
-                     <h3 class="title"><a name="d5e213"></a>Mageia Installation
+                     <h3 class="title"><a name="d5e214"></a>Mageia Installation
                      </h3>
                   </div>
                </div>
@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@
             </p>
             
                 
-            <p>More information, is available in <a class="ulink" href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Category:Documentation" target="_top">the Mageia wiki</a>.
+            <p>More information is available in <a class="ulink" href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Category:Documentation" target="_top">the Mageia wiki</a>.
             </p>
               
          </div>